Friday, August 31, 2007

B Day 2

Posted by Colby W., Block 6

Yo, this is Colby W. in 6th period creative writing class from the Language Arts Lab giving you the wrap up of today's event.

After a few minutes to get settled in and say what's up to everybody, we were given specific assignments based on our class.

Cody D. gave the best alien-friendly explanation of a school, classroom, and Mr. B that has ever fallen on human ears. If he gets around to e-mailing it or dropping it down here as a comment, you can see for yourself.

When Mr. B proposed that every simile is the truth and then later that every metaphor is a lie, we got into some heavy duty conversation about truth and lies, art and communication. Cody offered up his own quote of the day:
"Artists get rich from lying about art; politicians get rich from the art of lying."
Or something like that.

[Editor's note: Cody actually quoted "Artists lie to tell the truth; politicians lie to hide it." My research and memory so far suggest that maybe V said that in "V is for Vendetta." Googling led me to "Art is the lie that tells the truth," attributed to Pablo Picasso. (That's his "Man with Pipe" above and to the right. It's in the permanent collection of the Kimbell Art Museum in Fort Worth.)
Is there any other source information out there?]

People in Communication Applications were asked to prepare a speech for the school board stating why Mr. B shouldn't be fired because his room looks like a stockroom for boxes, extra books, and tables.

We in his Creative Writing class were given the job of developing ideas for poems about his room. Since I didn't give mine in class I will grace you with its sweet sounds right now.

This room is messed up
That's what I think
It came as a suprise
When something didn't stink
Tables, no desks,
Empty boxes on the flo'
If I was an Administrator
This room's teacher would have to go
7 classes, 1 room, 7 teaching ways
Since the teacher is Mr. Benton,
Give that man a raise!

Thursday, August 30, 2007

A Day Round Two



Posted by Sloane F., Block 3

Well, this day marks round two of A Day.
We were asked to finish up our assignments from day one.

As a student in Science Fiction class, I, personally, was assigned to explain to an alien the meaning of the arrangement of the classroom. I never ended up with anything complete or solid, just a jumble of thoughts and questions, but the mental processes were in full operation.

Others from different courses had some wonderful ideas for their assignments.

Valerie M. from Creative Writing took her little project to a "secretive" place. Those who heard know exactly what that means, but perhaps it would not be appropriate for a more restrictive environment. I loved it. It really was not at all what I was prepared to hear. It was so surprising in fact that Mr. B. didn’t even understand what she wrote at first. She created a short story about a man and a woman and why tables were more comfortable than desks: Easier to spread out and get to work.

Mr. Benton's brain misled him (somehow or other getting entangled in imagery from Vonnegut’s short story “Harrison Bergeron”) to thoughts of dancing. That metaphor worked pretty much the same after all. “Tables,” we concluded, “Give us the space and opportunity to do something we couldn't do in desks. There aren't any barriers between ours and the brain next to us. Plus, we don't feel so restricted and confined physically, and, therefore, our thoughts are freed in the same way.”

There is just no stopping the creativity flow in Benton's Language Lab. It’s so pro-creative!

Tuesday, August 28, 2007

A B-Day Day One Addendum


So, Day One for B-Day was a litle bit disjointed. No, really, even more disjointed than usual. Still, there was time to start the same thinking/imagining assignment from A Day One, but time ran out before all the responses were shared. Mr. B. cranked out another look-what-I-found piece of free verse:
a thousand diamonds shine
on the soles of our shoes
on the shoes of our souls
and we name them
Kwaku and Davonne
and Xavier and Hannah
and Ann
and Dopey and Sleazy and Bob
in the thousand shiny languages
of tables and chairs and lines and curves and crime scenes
today's crimes:
sloppy poetry, diamond smuggling, and destruction
of school propiety

the room is a mine
where gems may be found
diamonds and words and poems and plots
if we dig
if we go deep
if we go wide
and search together
and alone

*Christina C. waxed poetical in a way that was, we decided, more intended to polish the edges off the room and create a unified whole than Mr. B's jagged lingo. Her ideas generated the observation that all we ever have to communicate with, to make art or ideas out of, is our experience. (Despite public school persistent determination to separate our own experience from what we learn!)
*Johnathan H. contributed a smattering of scatological verse that was right on the money. His contribution led to an explanation from Mr. B. about the extreme importance of choosing the right language for the audience and purpose and context.

And the reason the response time was foreshortened?
In another fine Language Lab moment, the class created a list of the Seven Dwarves, taking the longest time to reach Bashful who would have been glad, we suppose, to have not been at the center of everyone’s memory and attention. Among the other dwarves mentioned along the way were: Sleazy, Greasy, Addled, Whitey, Blackie, Racisty, Saddy, Depressedy, Suicidally, and more. Did we mention Morey?

Why did we do this? Does anybody know? Mr. B. made up some spur-of-the-moment justification at the time, but did it hold water? He claims to be able to recall his reason, but does anybody else? Comments invited.

Monday, August 27, 2007

A Day One





It’s the first day of class on the first day of school. Some of us are meeting each other for the first time, and, as always with Mr. Benton, he tries to make first days something different from the usual routine. (That's Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. in a photo taken by his wife Jill Krementz at left, by the way, not Mr. B. Vonnegut died last year on April 11; Benton remains alive at this writing.)




So, the room is a jumble of tables and chairs (not student desks like every other room), and there are empty cardboard boxes all over the place. (At least there are places to sit. Those who have had first days with Mr. B. before have sat on the floor when all the student desks in the room were stacked to the ceiling in one big pile!) There are people in the same classroom taking Creative Writing and Literary Magazine and Science-Fiction and Multicultural Literature and Communication Applications. And one guy who got registered for Multicultural Poetry but doesn’t know how or why and doesn’t really want to be there anyway.
Benton explains that all the courses overlap in many ways because they are about thinking and expressing, reading and articulating, analyzing and responding. Yet each class has its own different emphasis. He invites the class to think about the boxes and tables all around the room from the perspective of the different courses:
* Creative Writing - Suppose you were writing a poem about this room. What would you think about writing? How would you proceed?
* Literary Magazine – If each table were a different category of entry for Wolfmoon, what would the arrangement of tables suggest about to genres and their differences and connections?
* Multicultural Literature – How does this arrangement of a classroom say about our own culture in contrast to some other culture’s way of educating?
* Science Fiction – How would you exlain to an alien the meaning of the arrangement of the room?





After ten minutes or so of thinking and discussing these ideas with tablemates, Mr. Benton offered his own reflections: He read a the opening page of The Sirens of Titan, a science fiction novel by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. It begins:
Everyone knows how to find the meaning of life within himself.
But mankind wasn’t always so lucky. Less than a century ago men and women did not have easy access to the puzzle boxes within them.
They could not name even one of the fifty-three portals to the soul.
....
The following is a true story from the Nightmare Ages, falling roughly, give or take a few years, between the Second World War and the Third Great Depression.
(Vonnegut 7-8)





It was hard to connect these hastily read words with the thinking assignment, but Mr. B. suggested that, by treating the “fifty-three portals to the soul” and the “Third Great Depression” and other things as taken-for-granted assumptions, Vonnegut was playing with our minds in a way typical of science fiction.
He mentioned that in Breakfast of Champions, another Vonnegut novel, Vonnegut makes himself a character in his own novel. In a memorable scene in the novel, character Vonnegut is sitting in a bar in author Vonnegut’s book when the telephone rings. The bartender answers and tells character Vonnegut that the phone is for him. As he walks to the bar to answer the phone, character Vonnegut remarked, “On the way to the bar, I had to think up who was going to be on the phone.” Thus returning to author Vonnegut but not exactly because he was in the bar walking and... Entanglement of identities. What do you take for granted? What has to be explained? (Mr. B. offered two other examples from the same novel of Vonnegut explaining things that everyone knows or takes for granted thereby making us wonder what else is possible.
He read his own first thoughts on the way to a poem:
stanzas
sorted randomly
here and there
in a boxy blue room

students
thrown together
brains ajumble in the unknown
air

puzzle pieces
strewn about
on the desktop Excel spreadsheet tables
with boxes
sprinkled like crystals of brown granulated sugar
writ large

He explained that the poem-in-progress sounded pretty good to him with its language lacking rhyme or order much like the room itself, but he added that art (any kind of art) demands choices. Considering and reconsidering the right words (or color or shape) for the desired purpose.





He and Kalish S. explained the current exhibit of the sculptures of Ron Mueck at the Modern Art Museum of Fort Worth. Mueck’s sculptures are excruciatingly real in every way but size, and a video at the exhibit showed him at work on one of his pieces. The process from idea to drawings to rough clay models and on and on took years to complete. For each piece. Art, visual or written, does not become art by quick inspiration but by prolonged intentional choice.
Students the offered some of their own thoughts.





* John S. imagined explaining to an alien that the tables were for writing. Benton interrupted with encouragement and the idea of explaining what writing is. Pushing John to go back behind his own assumptions.
* Kalish observed that Japanese culture organized education if more rigid and orderly spaces, that many an African culture might have tables but with many more students gathered around each one and minimal supplies. Our culture’s approach to education was more free!
* Sarah W. reported thinking visually at first about lines and shapes, contrasting the straight lines of the regular classroom with the curving more random lines of a classroom like our own. Then she added words and phrases to the lines (e.g. rigid, inflexible, reasoned, rational; creative, free, spontaneous, unpredictable).
* Sierra N. observed that if the tables (and literary/artistic genres) were not different, they could not be brought together. Their differences and separations gave meaning to their connections.
* Ashlie F. noted that the amount of physical space one has to operate within has an effect on the amount of mental space, freedome of thought, and creativity one can bring to a task. Narrow rows and desks encourage narrow thoughts and ideas.
As Kurt Vonnegut repeatedly says in his novel Slaughterhouse Five,



“So it goes.”